I have been going back and forth on how to open the story. Originally I had a bird to follow, piercing through straggles of cumulus clouds to an overall view of the floating city. Then it hovered on a street view above a few passing vehicles, landed on a mailbox to introduce the protagonist Max who burst out of the front door to catch a coming school bus.
Under The Clouds: Act I, Chapter 1, Scene 1a
Under The Clouds: Act I, Chapter 1, Scene 1a
Under The Clouds: Act I, Chapter 1, Scene 1a
I have been going back and forth on how to open the story. Originally I had a bird to follow, piercing through straggles of cumulus clouds to an overall view of the floating city. Then it hovered on a street view above a few passing vehicles, landed on a mailbox to introduce the protagonist Max who burst out of the front door to catch a coming school bus.